I pressed my back against the rocks, wondering if anybody had seen us.
“He said he would be around here somewhere”
I couldn’t believe what we were doing, but Annalise was so sure of herself – she made everything seem so exciting.
Later on, when they started asking questions, this was the only response I would repeat.
It would not do, but I could not think of anything else that made any sense.
It was as though I had been under a spell, swept up in the magic of sheer thrill – that reality failed to occur to me.
She had planned this. She had used me to get to the rocky outcrop, so far from her family… and now she was gone. So horribly, and irretrievably gone that it hurt my soul to think of it.
Who was the man on the boat? And would I ever see her face again?
150 words
Written for: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
125th Challenge
This week’s photo prompt is provided by Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode. Thank you Louise!
Very mysterious! Seems her friend has gotten her into a bind. Poor thing. Great story!!
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Thankyou!! It is amazing how a photograph can get the imagination working 😀
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Yes, that is true!
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OH dear, I just realized that she was kidnapped and didn’t leave her friend on her own free will. Sad!
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Intriguing story. Now I wonder what’s really going on.
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A sad and captivating story in one.
Kidnapping, vengeance, you have a knack for the suspenseful. Great read.
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I don’t know where these ideas come from. I feel like I have a long way to go – but as long as somebody is enjoying the read. 150 words makes it easier to write without feeling too precious. The ten year old gave me feedback tonight, which gutted me lol. “you need to be descriptive, but not OVERLY descriptive mama”.
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haha, in-house critique to keep you on your toes.
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I think it is easier to be creative within 150 words – than to do that in a full story. LOL I am wondering if my only capabilities are in challenging myself to stick to the word limit.
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